Here's an excerpt from a story in a fundraising message:
The puppy shivered in the winter cold. In his short life, he's never eaten anything but garbage, and nobody had ever said a kind word to him. Until we came a long, picked him up, wrapped him in a blanket, and took him to our shelter for nutritious food, medical care, and good old TLC.
But really, who cares?
In the real life of the donor who might encounter this story in a piece of direct mail or email, it's just a random story that has nothing to do with her! It's one of hundreds of random stories that flash in front of her every day. It might get her attention. But that's a matter of chance. And not very good odds!
So let's make a few revisions to that story:
A puppy is shivering in the winter cold not so far from your home. In his short life, he's never eaten anything but garbage, and nobody had ever said a kind word to him. Until you decide to help him. Your kindness will pick him up, wrap him in a blanket, and take him to our shelter for nutritious food, medical care, and good old TLC.
This is one of the things you'll learn if you take my 4-part Moceanic masterclass called Irresistible Communications for Great Nonprofits. Which is still open for registration.
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