Worried about what AI might do to your career or fundraising?
(My take: Don’t worry, it might be a useful tool for some, inexperienced fundraisers may misuse it, but that doesn’t really change anything.)
Then I saw this:
It’s on a piece of direct mail fundraising. The blurred-out part is the recipient’s real name.
Okay, pretty cool way to grab a reader’s attention, right? (I think it’s pretty spiffy, and I bet it helps increase response.)
But just look at the writing! Robotic, abstract, awkward. Not at all what a real person would say. (Also, it's not funny, but I can forgive that.)
It looks like it's AI-written, but I don't think it is, because I got it almost a year ago, before AI Fever swept the fundraising sector. And let’s admit it -- we’ve all seen writing just like that all our lives.
My point: You don’t have to be a robot to write like one. Plenty of human writers struggle to sound human, either because they lack the skill, or because there’s a committee making sure any humanity or naturalness is fully edited out before it gets published.
The scourge of stilted, poor, inhuman copy has been with us for a long time. Probably dating back to the markings-scratched-onto-clay-tablets days.
AI doesn’t change that. It just churns it out faster. Which may not be such a bad thing.
There’s always going to be room for skillful copywriters who are able to write good copy. Some of them will (maybe already are) using AI as a first-draft tool that it should be.
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